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fresh beginnings

radiating colors
paradise echoing 
softly touched
innermost desire
deep within
beating on
the walls
of the heart

coursing through
blood red
feelings for
one rose
handing you
an emotion
all that i am
speaking volumes
within blossoms

your fingers
upon the pulse
beating heart plays
one tune
only you
in a drum roll
the door opens
as you enter
deep chambers
sparking new beginnings
a beautiful start

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  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:16:00 PM
    A fresh and new beginning is always exciting, especially when there is someone to share it with! Wonderful work, very heartfelt!

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 6:07:00 PM
    Another beautiful romantic poem from you, My friend. Always so enjoyable to read...peter

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 4:50:00 PM
    Your fingers upon the pulse beating heartplays..Such an amazing verse Liam..Your words bloom like the soft light hue of rose blossoms..Very tender.I will visit yr other poems tomorow..Bravo