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Fresh and clean

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First pub 2012.


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Fresh and clean

I love the way she smells after a shower
so fragrant fresh and clean
and how she sits there
so beautiful
in her dressing gown
brushing her long wet hair
until it dry's and gleams.

Her sweet perfume fills the room
and sets my heart on fire
heightening my senses
and filling me with desire.

Peter Dome.copyright.2012.

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  1. Date: 12/23/2013 10:18:00 PM
    Peter Such a heartwarming and passionate write. Full of love and desire. Your emotions poured from your heart and soul. Nice job

    Dome Avatar Peter Dome
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Loved your poem. So much wisdom in tour words. A fav for me. thank you for sharing. take care. Pete.
    Dome Avatar Peter Dome
    Date: 12/24/2013 1:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hi Robin. so glad you enjoyed my poem. thank you very much.. I really appreciate your kindness. take care. best wishes. Pete.
    davis Avatar robin davis
    Date: 12/23/2013 10:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for the awesome comment on my Hidden Strength poem