Freezing Cold

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Winter’s always cold The air a brisk freezing temp Has a heartless feel Like that of a lost Relationship that’s gone by Piercing the sore pride Russell Sivey

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Don Johnson

Date: 9/20/2011 11:15:00 PM

if ya hoss runs off n leaves ya, if it wont come back thats right, hit it over th ass with the bridle, till it runs right outa sight, cos ya bound to catch a new one, if ya cast the rope just right, to saddle up n mount n ride, all through the summer night... catch a new horse or shiela hey:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/20/2011 11:18:00 AM

I agree.. a heartless feel .. Winter is so glum to me ..I am a Summer baby and Winter makes me rather sad.. except for holidays of course.. nice analogies in this piece Russell...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/20/2011 11:12:00 AM

Oh...feeling the bruises of my sore pride....what a reflection of my past! Another wonderful choka...You are good at intertwining nature with life's lessons here! All the best to you, RUZZZELL. hahha. Sorry I speellled your name wrong two!! lol. Gwebdolen :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2011 11:49:00 PM

cold weather AND relationships. Two good topics to compare, Russell. and they are both NO fun! (by the way, I totally made up that mermaid sonnet. It was implying sexual abuse of the child and my kids were never abused by anyone. Most of my poetry is fictional. But some are true!)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/19/2011 11:10:00 PM

pride is as cold as ice, russell.. a well-defined write! . :) huggs, nette