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Freefall

Freefall Bungee cord secure; My eyes saccade below me, Screaming as I plunge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 6:43:00 AM
Brave, brave girl, I would never have the courage to do a freefall, and your poem certainly captured that moment of the plunge, well done~~
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Date: 11/6/2010 5:46:00 AM
Very thoughtful and meaningful Senryu...Screaming as I plunge.. nice expression, Marie
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