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Freedom's Call

Freedom's call Forced slavery a blot on humanity, Rendering regretful burning inside, Ends up in revolt of the enduring tortured, Enormous suffering and lost pride, Demeaning wishes of most disrespect, Oppressed give back an honest fight, Mentoring anguish and heinous bloodshed, Struggle is when for the honour of deprived, Calls of freedom put the brave to war, Apocalypse ends, conquest rides a white horse, Leads to twilit sky as dusky night rides down, Long- lasting independence is a soulful right ! Written July 20th, 2015 For contest by Kim merryman

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/28/2015 4:49:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic: We will never stop listening for freedom's call. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 7/26/2015 12:35:00 PM
This is a brilliant and awesome acrostic my very dear friend, Dr. Upma. You did it very well, too. I love it and thoroughly enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for sharing and my Hearty Congratulations as well on your win. Many Hugs and Cheers! Have a great weekend! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 7/23/2015 5:01:00 PM
A powerful acrostic - many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2015 9:27:00 AM
Dr. Umpa. I just stopped by to say congratulations on awesome win:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/23/2015 12:41:00 AM
Dr Upma, congratulations on your win. Awesome Acrostic. Love SKAT
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 12:48:00 AM
Thnx SKAT A my dear friend! Glad u liked!
Date: 7/23/2015 12:21:00 AM
Hi Upma! Both the acrostic form and its contents have been rendered with an able pen. The call for freedom is felt by all of us, especially those who suffer oppression. The last stanza is lovely and positive. Congrats on a most merited win. // paul
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/23/2015 12:47:00 AM
Thnx a lot Paul! Always look forward to ur kind visits!

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