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Freedom Though Misunderstood

Overly kind _little slow in study Unskilled in sports; not beautiful was she He came into life when anybody Would have made a marriage match not just he Becoming acquainted at church was their way He flashed freedom before her youthful eyes In love she speedily fell that warm spring day Before she thought or even could realize She boldly and in secret whispering Displayed the ring that she now proudly wore Soon she would be a bride to be longing For his soon return from his duty tour Marriage offered change_some for good_ Some for difficulty_ freedom though misunderstood____

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/18/2011 9:58:00 AM

… goody cheers for the high win, sara! :) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/18/2011 5:38:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your super big win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty write my friend.. enjoy with luv..happy weekend too...

Afolabi Taiwo

Date: 3/7/2011 1:44:00 PM

I enjoy this one, perfectly captures a kind of boy meets girl love story so starting a heartwarming relationship that turns into varied experience which, culminates in a desire to be always together, fine piece of sonnet.

Carol Fillmore

Date: 3/7/2011 12:20:00 PM

I like this one, Sara, enjoy ones that tell a story:) Thanks for your comment on Sunday, March 6 and happy you enjoyed the read! I was just looking out the window, describing what I saw ... needed a push to get a flow going! A dreary wet late winter day. Got the same thing today;( Carol

Christopher Marcum

Date: 3/7/2011 8:21:00 AM

smile -- ahhh, the weddings ring gazed upon perhaps within desirous anticipation while as waiting for her king so to speaks return from his tour of duty or something or another??? -- very moving my dear and, 'thank you,' for stopping by and comming; very kind -- love, Always, christopher ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 2:38:00 PM

a delightful return with wedded bliss to boot, sara... enchanting work of art! if for a contest, winning wishes to you! wishing you and yours fine health :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 11:00:00 AM

Beautiful romantic expressions Sara.. profound romance is always in style my friend and to retell a sweet story as this is lovely.. is it u? perhaps .. but it is amazing to read luv.. thankxx for your gracious and always uplifting and endearing comments on my contest entries .. much appreciated my friend..