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Freedom Pub

Comes the time when freedom expires The gathering need of a patriotic cabal One chancing upon such surely inquires In time meaningful writing on the wall Utmost secrecy Freedom Pub requires. Written December 8, 2022 Submitted to "Freedom Pub" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joe Maverick

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Joe Maverick

Date: 1/10/2023 2:53:00 PM

Well Milton I gave you a second place..' in Respect of your makup as a man' I know you Would not want to be patronised, so I didn't Give you a first.' Yet I coulden't find it in me to Place you lower ' anyway i am quite the realist And being as you have gone over the finish line I am thinking you might put in a good word for Me? Lol.)))

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/10/2022 4:32:00 AM

I think you are running this one up to the podium level in the contest.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/10/2022 8:19:00 AM

Thanks for the comment, Caren. I had no idea what to write about the Freedom Pub. Never been there. Don't know what it's all about.

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/8/2022 10:33:00 AM

Kudos to you for writing an entry for this contest. I have no idea where to go with the theme.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/8/2022 11:37:00 AM

I had no idea either, Jenna. I have entered all the listed contests now, except for Unseeking Seeker's latest. I have no idea what to write about. I'm hopeful.