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Freedom gives itself away

Everytime i think i am hiding
hiding from experience 
the thought flow forever blinding
captive in its omnipresence 
certain paths have no finding
beware of any convergence
a rigid view forever binding.
Seek to witness truth in beauty
witness the beauty in truth
a bite of apple can prove fruity
each natural chunk holds proof
change perception alter reality
experience the magnitude of truth
don’t assert the definition of congeniality.

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  1. Date: 2/20/2010 8:44:00 AM
    Flowery and beautiful, what a wonderf flow , message and imagery, good work. Congrats on being featured .Judy Riley

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 11:06:00 AM
    Thanks for all of your comments, however some critisism be it constructive or destructive is always welcomed.

  1. Date: 2/17/2010 7:20:00 AM
    Lance, Congratulations on yopur poem feature this week. Sincere, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 2/16/2010 4:09:00 PM
    Congratulations on the feature....:JP]

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 12:45:00 PM
    Lance, many congratualtions on your poetry being featured >> James

  1. Date: 2/15/2010 6:11:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Lance. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/14/2010 11:23:00 AM
    Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 11/7/2009 9:35:00 AM
    Welcome to the Soup Lance. ;) it's nice to read you...