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Freedom

Let it be, let it go, be free Learn one must from their demons If not to become an all-knowing beast An all-knowing beast knows nothing And descends into the pit of arrogance Rigidity snaps the strong independent Perfection is a fool's gamble Lighten the perfect load, break the chains Alone wearied survival no longer suffices Isolation is now an obsolete excuse Now must be the time to soar Questions are not illicit objects Strength must come from inquiries Learning is a constant spinning wheel Dawn of the world's reality is here

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Date: 4/26/2024 6:24:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/10/2016 12:37:00 AM
ENJOYING THIS AGAIN
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Date: 11/3/2013 10:36:00 AM
Welcome David, fellow Canadian to the Soup. I love your poem and am looking forward to reading more. Betty
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:09:00 AM
Welcome David to poetry soup ,a great group of poets will read and appreciate your work. The third stanza, last two lines are excellent. Anne
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Date: 8/5/2013 10:33:00 AM
Hello new member: David ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/5/2013 9:43:00 AM
David, love the dawn of reality.. ,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2013 4:46:00 AM
good morning David, I like the line> isolation obsolete excuse. enjoyed your poem and point on freedom -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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