Freedom

Came looking for a verse to transcribe Couldn’t think of anything to inscribe Mind wasn’t directing any orderly lyrics Composedly accepting everything as is No ripples of thoughts, no dilemmas, No judgements, no opinions, No portrayals of any sorts “Why does anything need description?” was its question “Just be” was its proposition Decided to ruminate on that A feeling of freedom came just like that. Smita Kulkarni 02/11/2021

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/31/2021 8:30:00 PM

Interesting contemplation. ;0)

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 4/2/2021 2:53:00 PM

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/28/2021 1:12:00 PM

That is such a solemn thought--"just be"! A powerful write Smita--a bliss for those who can live in your message. Not easy for most. Much illumination in your words.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 3/2/2021 3:10:00 PM

It is indeed hard to live in the message Vijay! Thanks for visiting.