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Through my eyes, he sees his true self and is disgusted by what he sees Citing vulgar obscenities one moment and then the next desperate pleas He knows he is morally wrong and that I could never forgive He compromised my health! Now with himself he has to live Integrity he has not a ounce Compulsive liar, I found out! Was he born without a conscience? To intentionally hurt, a heart he is without! I'm glad that I found out what he's about He would have sent me to an early grave I know karma will one day find him and he will get back all that he gave My guardian angel guided me Showed me what I failed to see All my nagging doubts have been answered I finally found the truth to set me free. Sponsor Kim Morrison Contest Name Tell Me A True Story

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/7/2013 6:12:00 PM

So many people out there that are like this both male and female..I don't see how they live with themselves..Great write about the topic and I hope that it is not your life now nor ever has been but just a work about the topic of people who seem to have no conscience...Thanks for stopping by.Sara

Dominic Amezimi
Date: 11/5/2015 2:35:00 PM

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/5/2013 10:30:00 PM

WOW... What an alarming story. I'm fearful of the secrets that people hold when they know their choices could cause destruction. Epic truth here :)

Heather Ober

Date: 6/25/2013 1:18:00 PM

I feel as if you are telling my own story! I knew someone just like this - a compulsive liar with absolutely no conscience. It was the first guy I ever loved, and man, was it ever hard to break free! You've done an excellent job of expressing feelings of betrayal, anger, and ultimately relief to be free of a scumbag who doesn't deserve you!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2013 12:24:00 AM

Hi, again, sweetie!! thanks for your comment!!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/24/2013 11:59:00 PM

One like him can know no remorse, he is a parasite.I am glad you escaped.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2013 5:12:00 PM

Hi, there, Sweetie, thanks for stopping by my poetry today!

John Posey

Date: 6/22/2013 5:09:00 PM

Surrendering to lust and forsaking love is very serious business. You had no other conclusion to draw... Congrats on both your victories.... Love and respect for your courage ..... Jake

Kim Morrison

Date: 6/22/2013 12:48:00 PM

Lovely piece! Congrats! thanks for submitting Kim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/22/2013 11:34:00 AM

A sad but touching tale. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Sean L Sanders

Date: 6/22/2013 4:36:00 AM

Very nicely said I loved your poem poet

Seren Roberts

Date: 6/22/2013 12:04:00 AM

Cecilia glad you are free in mind and soul ...Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/21/2013 3:32:00 PM

this is so positive believe it or not, this poem will give so much strength to anyone in the same situation, amazing poetry...

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/19/2013 11:46:00 AM

And I'll be wishing for better tomorrows for you. Respect to you for this piece...

Mario De Paz

Date: 6/19/2013 7:26:00 AM

This is a true, sad story. But I am sure that after found freedom there will be room for trying to help the one who compromised your health, otherwise you cannot be completely happy!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/18/2013 11:51:00 PM

Oh...so sorry you had to suffer abuse, my dear....to the point of your health being compromised...how terrible. Those who abuse often act out in the only way they know because thet have been abused themselves and carry baggage. They need professional help to alsi he set free. Since this is for a contest...can I point out a spelling mistake which often others correct me on???? I believe you meant conscience....knowing of right and wrong. Thanks for your visits to my work. They bring me joy!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2013 11:18:00 PM

I am SO glad you got a guardian angel to get you away from that monster. I remember stuff you told me from before. Good for you, sweetie and I really like how you made a story poem out of the experience. Should do well in the contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/18/2013 9:16:00 PM

Your poem is wonderful Cecilia, nice to see you were lead by an angel... glad karma always sets her date for paybacks... an excellent poem... xox~ Linda

Dan Kearley

Date: 6/18/2013 5:24:00 PM

Is it really true? Are you now free? I hope so?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/18/2013 1:28:00 PM

- A poem from reality .... so sad love .... it was good that the truth came out. - Very well written, Cecilia. - Good luck in the contest! (and love) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)