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Free Your Future

Free Your Future It's been such a beautiful, hard, hard life, so far... All that I have tried...all that I've lost... Paying the full price at an elevated cost... But there is always tomorrow... Everything will be just fine...someday... Life is buried deep in the pockets of disparity... Destiny is held in the palm of your hand... Free your hands and raise them up towards God... Release the binds that keep you from accomplishment... And let your future be seen...You just have to believe... In His Will...And your own...Then you will be free.... Envision the life you want and were meant to live... See all the things you believe... Then truth becomes reality... Can you not see... The future to be... Happily... 05/10/16

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Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/12/2016 1:09:00 PM

Well written Brian!

Brian Davey
Date: 5/13/2016 1:56:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Lu Loo

Date: 5/11/2016 1:30:00 PM

Brian, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Brian Davey
Date: 5/12/2016 1:11:00 AM

Thank you Laura

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 5/11/2016 1:22:00 PM

Congratulations Brian on the placement of the contest

Brian Davey
Date: 5/12/2016 1:10:00 AM

Thank you so much

Constance La France

Date: 5/10/2016 9:50:00 PM

a beautiful free verse with a great message

Brian Davey
Date: 5/11/2016 2:17:00 AM

Thank you Constance, have a wonderful evening Sweetheart

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/10/2016 8:51:00 PM

Hi Brian, I like your words here, you have a great way of expressing yourself through poetry, XOX ~LINDA~

Brian Davey
Date: 5/11/2016 2:16:00 AM

Oh My Dear Linda I am really, really happy to see you back on my comments also! This place wouldn't be the same without you here! Thanks my friend and I am glad you are back

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/10/2016 8:34:00 PM

You expressed your encouraging perspective with enthusiasm. Self-confidence and spirituality are key factors in a successful future methinks ... nicely done ...

Brian Davey
Date: 5/11/2016 2:15:00 AM

Thanks Timothy and it is nice to see you back on my comments page