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Free To Roam

A robin red am I and free to roam because I relish flirting with the breeze. So gleefully I glide among the trees until I’ve had my fill and head back home. A bumble bee am I and free to roam collecting nectar on a sunny day from many lovely flowers on my way until I’ve had my fill and head back home. A baby foal am I and free to roam. I gambol happily in pastures green or where some willows near a brooklet lean until I’ve had my fill and head back home. A butterfly am I and free to roam, My pretty wings spread color through the sky. Meandering so happily am I until I’ve had my fill and head back home. Jan. 26, 2023 for Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 34 - Poetry Contest Title Chose is #4: Free to Roam

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Date: 2/1/2023 3:58:00 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this marvelous poem, Andrea:-)
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Date: 1/30/2023 7:51:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day/week..................
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Date: 1/29/2023 4:02:00 AM
Ahh!! Nature at its finest. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/28/2023 8:31:00 PM
Great Idea. Great Composition. Sure to win.
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Date: 1/28/2023 4:00:00 PM
It's a lovely write Andrea, I muse on these creature and think it's like a metaphor of life.
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Date: 1/27/2023 8:43:00 PM
Your poem is so cleverly done, Andrea ! Of all I wish to be 'a baby foal gamboling happily in pastures green' ! Love this poem with its childlike naivety!~
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Date: 1/27/2023 4:37:00 PM
Enjoyed this carefree write Andrea..I'm finding I cannot find other poets in a nornal search i've Been aware of this for two weeks? Strange..)
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Date: 1/27/2023 10:26:00 AM
Your poem, is free to delight, Andrea. Harry
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Date: 1/27/2023 6:13:00 AM
Your words roam with a robin, a bumble bee, a butterfly-- and bring delight to the reader. Lovely theme, Andrea.
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Date: 1/27/2023 12:56:00 AM
You gave us several examples of creatures roaming on some beautiful day. Loved it. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Date: 1/26/2023 5:45:00 PM
I am sure you will at least place in this contest. You did a great job.
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Date: 1/26/2023 5:44:00 PM
I am sure you will at least place in this contest. You did a great job.
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Date: 1/26/2023 2:23:00 PM
A beautiful and uplifting poem Andrea. I smiled as I read each line. Hugs Anne :-)
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Date: 1/26/2023 1:57:00 PM
A creative write. Have a blessed day.............
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