Free Me

I look for the sky I look way up high I search for them I see no one but him Its being in hell Caged inside a cell Keeping me from crazy But things are just so hazy I cant even think Please pass me a drink I dont want to wake Im tired of this ache Im all alone Being forced on my own I feel as no one on my side So ill stay inside It seems i lost my mind With temper is what i find But as you see Society kept me from being free

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/5/2016 11:01:00 AM

Nice first post. Welcome to poetry soup.Wish a successful journey ahead..........hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/5/2016 5:31:00 AM

Armoni, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Armoni Ford
Date: 4/5/2016 7:31:00 AM

Thank you