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As far as the eye can see, thunder roars with such fury in the horizon. Beneath the sea sculpturing deep tints and shades of blue, briny crystallizing. The tide draws away and breathes its curse. Articulating its exaltation moving force, manifesting and mesmerizing. Bout gaits end with the striking off sound. Airborne when all four are off the ground. Breeze laced through his mane with pride. Feeling the cold embrace, he draws a breath with every stride. As the rain caress, fire burns inside, free its soul bound.
7/20/2016 Rhyme AABBA AABBA Two Stanzas - Two Only - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Date: 8/2/2016 8:24:00 AM
I though this read like a winner; congratulations.
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Date: 7/27/2016 12:33:00 AM
Splendid write that beautifully complements the image:) Congratulations on your top spot, Eve:)
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Date: 7/26/2016 11:15:00 AM
Excellent piece Eve, congratulations...
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Date: 7/26/2016 9:05:00 AM
Hi Eve, Congrats on your top win. It was well deserved :-) Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2016 5:28:00 AM
Congrats Eve, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 7/26/2016 4:52:00 AM
I can feel the thundering of the hoofs as the free spirit gallops away! And it's true that all four feet get off the ground in a gallop.Congrats on your top spot, Eve. ~karam~
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Date: 7/26/2016 12:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Eve! Brilliant write :)
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Date: 7/25/2016 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your great win my friend. Hugs, bl
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:23:00 PM
feeling so happy to see you on top place. congrats and hugs
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Date: 7/25/2016 4:39:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'two stanzas' contest. A beautiful poem about a beautiful animal! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:31:00 PM
Fabulous piece Eve,each word seems so perfectly handpicked!Congratulations!
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:26:00 PM
amazing imagery Eve congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:11:00 PM
Congrats! Eve on your fabulous win...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:05:00 PM
Eve, a wonderful poem you have written here lovely lady! congrats on your 1st place, well deserved :)-luloo
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Date: 7/25/2016 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Eve. I love sharing this win with you. You know I love horses.
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Date: 7/22/2016 8:05:00 PM
Oh! Eve how lovely is this poem, if you don't win there is something wrong because it is brilliant and boy what a subject, one of the most beautiful animals in this world, loved it, take care my friend........Vera
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Date: 7/22/2016 3:26:00 AM
Captivating words, beautiful picture. Love this wonderful association.
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:43:00 PM
You use your gold tipped pen to describe in such lavish style what most of us find hard to even see. Thank you for those rare and beautiful glimpses and secret promises. This one has certain passion, the last more playful. You do both well. David (a fellow traveller along the poetry way)
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:15:00 PM
Hi Eve, You've created a beauty. It was a pleasure to read this lovely write. Good luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:57:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 7/21/2016 7:12:00 AM
Well written beautiful poem x
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Date: 7/21/2016 6:55:00 AM
Just Classic ... Sure to win not just the contest but many a heart as well ...
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:17:00 AM
Captivating imagery that makes the heart gallop dear, Eve. Good luck!
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