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'Free Falling'

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'Free Falling'



You never grasp the crux of me labeling something this when it was actually that in between it all, the depth of it got lost instead of floating I was free falling unsure if you would be there to catch me the best part is I felt relieved even though I had no idea where I would end up I just knew sometimes not knowing maybe exactly what I needed because with that comes anxiety, in that anxiety my sleeping spirit awakens there is something new on the horizon something without control free falling just another way to reach my destiny without a map, in the end I will know this is home, exactly where I need to be
©07092012

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  1. Date: 9/19/2012 1:50:00 PM
    Wilma, another masterpiece. Great insight and ability to put it to words. I spent a big time of my youth trying to fight the world. I have learned to just go with the flow more as I have grown older. A lot easier that way for me.This is fantastic! Thanks Wilma

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 11:03:00 AM
    gripping piece that leaves me breathless, wilms... we don't need a map to get home... enchanting!...:) huggs!

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 5:36:00 PM
    You write with such genuineness and depth, Wilma. I think we've all done this "freefalling" giving one a feeling of "anxiety". But as you say, when we brush ourselves off we find that this is "exactly where I need to be". Best wishes! Mikki

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 1:34:00 AM
    Wilma, your words are free falling very beautifully here. I love the depth of your writing, it shows the beauty of your soul.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 11:27:00 PM
    this is a wonderful poem Wilma, enjoyed it very much this evening

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:54:00 PM
    Where ever you hang your hat is home Wilma; hope yoursleeping spirit always has something special to wake up to. Have a wonderful week end sweetie.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 11:15:00 AM
    I would catch you Wilma..its just that am free falling myself to these days;) This is a unique free verse CTC,one that speaks loudly of emotions and deep feelings.Have a great weekend my friend:-) Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:49:00 AM
    Another astounding piece from a very delightful quill of yours my friend! This is a fabulous, wondrous piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:31:00 AM
    I'll always be there to catch you sweet lady, another wonderful profound poem from you.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:23:00 AM
    The weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Wilma. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 7:17:00 AM
    A great write with deep introspection and personal meaning, Wilma! Thanks for sharing...hugs, Rhonda

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:25:00 AM
    I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing it. Love it.

  1. Date: 9/7/2012 6:14:00 AM
    A fantasy and a deep thinking mind ..... Wilma you have a very good poem here. Wonderful written. Today is Friday ..... weekend!! Have a wonderful weekend. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)