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A FETAL PROPOSITION There is a portion of the population in this particular nation that just don't or won't understand me and won't let me be the me I need to be i'm laying in a pool of sweat my blanket and sheets are soaking wet i'm shaking and in a fetal position because kicking a heroin habit is a frightening proposition so they don't get the fact at all that i'm at a point of rise or fall they call me reminiscing about the good old days while i'm trying to forget them in a number of ways so Tommy calls, and Lenny calls and Richie calls as well all asking me if I want to meet them on the way to hell i'm trying to kick a habit but its kicking my ass instead and they want to know if I want to get high, well why don't I just slice my wrists instead © 2012.....copyright PHREEPOETREE~free cee!~

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Date: 9/8/2012 1:35:00 AM
You can do it it may be late in life but you can, you know my brother didn't try and left four fatherless children the youngest being two... and no they are not better of without him .Sweat it out Jeff xx
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Date: 9/7/2012 10:12:00 PM
YOU CAN DO IT!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! YOU CAN DO IT!!! If these words are true? Just do it! Do it for the real YOU! The one hiddin inside that is screaming to get out! The real YOU my friend...The one that wants to be ~FREE~ U ~Cee~
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Date: 9/7/2012 6:57:00 PM
Wow Jeffry, it must be a terrible habit to kick; I smoked for years and finally got rid of them but it sure wasn't easy. You wrote a powerful verse that speaks aloud warning.
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Date: 9/7/2012 6:55:00 PM
Very interesting imagination (?)... in any case a very good poem... Terry
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