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allow me to tell you about a man i know his righteous rhetoric says he created me turning water into wine is quite a good show by a man i mainain strongly has always hated me sure two thousand years have preserved his word while phools and phollowers tithe on Sunday in his name they bow to the sermons his servents have heard but for my trials it's this man with whom i place the blame his good book promises he can save me all i have to do is pray to his spirit enduring it also says i should be grateful for everything he gave me well i find his requests really quite boring somehow he got people to believe he walked on water to prove his divinity and fed thousands of folks with fish like flounder and cod his good book says he will forgive me unto infinity well it just so happens that i won't ever fuc**ng forgive god (c) 2012 PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~

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Date: 2/22/2012 7:36:00 PM
You might regret that someday! Ha,ha Kim's tellin ya like it is.But keep on workin the words.~~~~I'm still waiting on a reply on The Sisters?
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Date: 2/22/2012 10:44:00 AM
You have a right to your opinion, Jeffrey. But it hurts me to see anyone blaspheme God. You can't blame God for all your problems. He gave us free will, to make our own choices and it is these choices that bring most of our problems. I said most, not all. Some things are beyond our control. I appreciate your comments on my poems, but if you truly hate God, don't read my religious ones if you are going to blaspheme Him in your comments. I will pray for you. Love, Kim
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