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Free Breakfast

I saw the Purple Martins in flight They swooped and dived to my delight There was not enough Martins to eat all the mosquitoes Those squitoes left ate breakfast for free on me

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Susan Mills

Date: 7/16/2010 6:47:00 AM

sweet poetry as I'm reading your poem and thinking of breakfast. Mosquitoes, what an eat! witty! Love, Susan

Daver Austin

Date: 7/14/2010 2:17:00 PM

Yes, a very food-discriminate bird, the mosquito. I hear they hate black flag. Good write. Love, Dave

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2010 8:37:00 PM

soup mail

David Byrne

Date: 7/13/2010 7:10:00 PM

very dramatic!

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2010 5:44:00 PM

FUNNY ONE, CLEVER TITLE FOR YOUR WRITE LOL// ENJOYED YOUR WRITE- SKAT

Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/13/2010 10:26:00 AM

LOL we can't be anyone's breakfast sis! great write, thanks for your comments.

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/13/2010 10:02:00 AM

cute one Sare, enjoyed it

Michael Gelb

Date: 7/13/2010 9:24:00 AM

Nice t read a short poem. I have trouble writing short poems.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2010 8:46:00 AM

Good morning Sara, what a wonderful poem to read, enjoyed. Have anice blessed day,..LeeAnn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/13/2010 7:14:00 AM

Thanks God we have no mosquitoes around here in town! I was fed up with all those bites before! Nicely written, Sara...thanks for your comments...Gert