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Free As a Bird

Breathing wind across ocean currents Waves of a sea murmur under tides turn over emotions awakening Satin white washed surf Beholding upon the rocks Beloved apex a sunbeams brilliance Wetly kissed under a rainbow arch Throwing light of the moon spotlighting dancing with the shadows Crouching where the sun rests Twilight fires burn amber within clouds shooting gunbarrel grey

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Gary Bateman

Date: 4/30/2016 7:53:00 AM

Hello Liam Mate!! A moving and spectacular free verse write for sure, with such powerful and emotive imagery. Outstanding!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/27/2016 10:50:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^