Free

I’m sitting here Watching you While your feet are on flat ground My head is high in the clouds Maybe that’s where difference Tears us apart Because in my free time I look to numb the pain, While you live Free of the struggle, That holds me down Free of the addiction, To anything that’ll numb the pain Free of your mind, Free of the demons That plague mine.

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Jerry T Curtis

Date: 8/3/2014 2:03:00 PM

A belated Warm Welcome to you into the Soup, you do good work, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry and sipping more Soup.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/13/2014 11:47:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sybil :) - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/12/2014 11:54:00 AM

Sybil, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will find much to encourage you on this site as you share your poetry with others who love to write. Please visit my poems when you are able. Many writers will comment on your poetry if you do the same. Best wishes.

Skat A

Date: 6/11/2014 10:57:00 PM

Hi Sybil,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2014 10:10:00 PM

Sybil, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@