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I go outside, smell the air. I know I am free. From school, from teachers. I know I am free. But that awkward moment were you see a teacher outside of school. I maybe am free. We talk for whole train ride. I maybe am free. But then that teacher leaves, and I arrive to my stop. I know I am free. When I arrive home, I hear my family. I don't feel free?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/24/2012 3:45:00 AM
You are right, freedom smells like fresh air, it`s a wonderful feeling :-)
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Date: 5/21/2012 6:54:00 PM
family will do that, no matter how old you get.
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Ricardo Moises
Date: 5/21/2012 6:58:00 PM
Thank you for understanding.

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