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Below is the poem entitled Free which was written by poet Ricardo Moises. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I go outside, smell the air.
I know I am free.
From school, from teachers.
I know I am free.
But that awkward moment were you see a teacher outside of school.
I maybe am free.
We talk for whole train ride.
I maybe am free.
But then that teacher leaves, and I arrive to my stop.
I know I am free.
When I arrive home, I hear my family.
I don't feel free?

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  1. Date: 5/24/2012 3:45:00 AM
    You are right, freedom smells like fresh air, it`s a wonderful feeling :-)

  1. Date: 5/21/2012 6:54:00 PM
    family will do that, no matter how old you get.

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    Date: 5/21/2012 6:58:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for understanding.