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My hand opens slowly, the balloon flies..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/23/2010 1:22:00 PM
Sometimes in life we have to open our hands and release, for so many reasons >> James
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:17:00 PM
Very meaningful thought with explicit images, Michael
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Date: 8/9/2010 5:43:00 PM
Sometimes we have to "let go" to sense true freedom. Very intuitive senryu, Michael. Goes to my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/9/2010 4:06:00 PM
Release to freedom and watch until it can be seen no more..Great write..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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