Free

look up at the sky I wish that I could fly ever so high I just want to be free free to be only me the moon winks as the thoughts race through my mind unlimitless as it trails behind I beseech myself to let it be my only thought is to be free

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P Sheart

Date: 8/31/2008 12:19:00 PM

Hi sweet! I love the message in this awe inspiring write. Ahhh, to truly be free is how we're all meant to be. This is a lot like my poem free to just be me. We're on the same wave length my dear! Here's to flying high and free! Take care hun. I truly loved this one. Love Light Truth Patricia

Cecil Hickman

Date: 8/27/2008 8:30:00 PM

beauty and peace described in your words within this poem,,, and Thank you for all the comments and taking the time to read my poetry,,blessings...Cecil

Adell Foster

Date: 8/24/2008 6:07:00 PM

Hi D-nyce, this poem has marvelous imagery and flow... let your spirit freely fly like the eagle soaring away from all things which may cause grief... Excellent writing :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

P Sheart

Date: 8/12/2008 1:58:00 PM

Here's to being free! This makes me all dreamy and makes me ponder life with a sense of knowing that is real. Just berautiful! Always a pleasure to read your lovely poetry. Take care hun. Love Light Truth Patricia

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/9/2008 7:35:00 AM

nice write dnece.jhl

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 8/8/2008 3:52:00 PM

Be you D-nyce. Nobody does it better. God Bless. Vince

Gregory Golden

Date: 8/6/2008 10:54:00 AM

Solid imagery, expression and message. Freedom exist in your mind. Your mind will set you free. God is a path to freedom

Heidie Buys

Date: 8/3/2008 1:22:00 PM

So much yearning expressed here, well written and touches the soul. Very well done. Regards Heidie

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/30/2008 4:48:00 PM

Felt like you were so free you could fly when you wrote this! Dreamy and delightful to read. Love, Shar

Daver Austin

Date: 7/30/2008 12:41:00 PM

I love this, deneen. Sounds like something a person would say wishing upon a star at night. Something about it is so simple and fine. Love, daver