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I have been through the fire of addiction. enslaved for years by an illusion. a monsterous ugly beast revealed leaves me battered broken and bruised. I crawl away with my life I have been to hell.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/6/2024 6:16:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 10:43:00 PM

TERRY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Derrick Burton

Date: 7/27/2008 1:30:00 AM

you are writing about it now which means you survived.deep poem WRITE ON

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/17/2008 4:06:00 PM

Wow. This is extremely powerful. The short lines work so well. So sorry for what you have been through. Hope it is now in the past. Warmest wishes and good luck. Love, Shar