"The harder you work, the luckier you get."
Below is the poem entitled FREDDY'S DETERMINATION which was written by poet
Crisci. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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Young Freddy was a very skinny guy,
pretty girls didn't stare at him, just walked by;
a great idea stroke him...
did it come from a dream?
He pumped up his lean muscles and aimed high.