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Freckled With Stars

Venus peeks down from above, admiring Earth's azure seas. And instantly falls in love with all the beauty She sees. The tides rise and ebb offshore, lured by phases of the moon. And tethered; forevermore, they will waltz to Luna's tune. Shrouded in shadows of black; night's dark curtain appears stark. Yet, when Luna draws it back, golden moonbeams gild the dark. Heaven is freckled with stars, piercing an ebony sky. And a reddish blush tints Mars, as a shooting star streaks by.

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Date: 5/12/2018 11:09:00 PM
What an awesome title! Lovely personification of Venus who "falls in love with everything that She sees."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 10/19/2015 12:18:00 AM
Wonderful personification, Emile, a lovely piece. Regards, Viv
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Date: 10/19/2015 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Viv, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/18/2015 3:11:00 PM
what a beauty here - lovely descriptions
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/18/2015 7:37:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/17/2015 9:48:00 PM
Emile cleverly written. Very nice, love the imagery here. One of your best. Enjoyed reading read it to my wife she loved it.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/18/2015 8:41:00 AM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate your support. It's nice to hear that your wife like it as well, all my best to her. Emile.
Date: 10/17/2015 12:47:00 PM
Love the 'freckled with stars' image
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/17/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thanks Gail, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/17/2015 12:32:00 PM
I am a lover of the sky Emile and this is a beautiful ode.
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Date: 10/17/2015 1:36:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/17/2015 12:05:00 PM
Quite an enthralling rendition of the night,and yes the concept of stars freckling an ebony sky is so unique and amazing.Brilliant piece Sir Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/17/2015 12:10:00 PM
Thanks Miraj, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/17/2015 11:16:00 AM
- Beautiful written, Emile - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/17/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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