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Freakishly Warm

I like an empty trash basket. It tempts me to fill it with wads of wasted effort In a futile attempt to write the words That will finally win your heart. Perhaps when hell freezes over, But it’s a freakishly warm day in mid-December. When the offering basket is full Of ardent vulnerabilities I'll dump it out, count my blessings, And start over.

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Date: 12/18/2021 12:21:00 AM
Hi MichaeThis is an interesting short poem that stimulates one's imagination. Regards Mpho.
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Date: 12/17/2021 9:29:00 PM
Michael, I really like this little poem. I can picture the scene...the empty wastebasket, the offering basket is full... the idea of counting your blessings and starting all over, so common to us, your readers. Good stuff!
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Date: 12/16/2021 6:30:00 PM
very nice .. had to smile at hell freezing coz I find cold hellish :)
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Michael Kalavik
Date: 12/16/2021 8:47:00 PM
;-)

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