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Freak

your standing watching the freak burn in the dead of night all the tears of pain that run down you face for the pain never stops your tears of pain keep falling in to the flame's here me cry here my die you destroyed the heart in my eye's so it time to burn forever more for you lost the cure . the night walker

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 9:22:00 PM
a very deep write,,but written very well with a lot of feeling,,thank you for all your reading of my words and for commenting upon them as well,,all the best in your writing future,,,Blessings..Cecil
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Date: 11/5/2010 9:37:00 AM
Enjoyed reading the many diverse poems here today. I am glad to have came across your amongst these wonderful poems Duncan. Wishing you a magnificent weekend. Love, Carol
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