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Frayed Edges

It is worn, patched, and tattered, frayed about the edges. It has at times offered me adrenal ascendency, scared me out of my wits, challenged me to act, or to be still. Its warmth has often failed me. Its compass deviated from true north or at times just ignored. I was told to “wear it as a loose garment”, yet it often felt too restraining or cumbersome. Still it is my choice to slip into it each morning, share a quiet moment, a sip of coffee, a laugh about a patch or stain. It is more frail now, more likely to require re-stitching of old wounds and faded patches. And yet it serves me well. Its distant colors chuckle as we recall a hot sauce stain, that bar in Angelo, the too often sewed pocket still holds its own. Several of the “original” buttons remain to taunt the newer ones. None are sure where the others went, or why. And so we sip coffee and recall the tears and joys of birthday cakes, of babies snuggled in its flannel fierceness, and carry on.
loosely worn garments a history of flannel frayed edges of life 2/25/2023 It Means A Lot To Me Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/29/2023 5:04:00 PM
I don't know how I missed this, John. It's a lovely remembrance to an old, but still young-at-heart flannel garment...robe, I'm thinking. :)
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Date: 3/4/2023 7:21:00 AM
very enjoyable read, John - well done!
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Date: 3/4/2023 12:08:00 AM
Exceptional poetry... beautiful. Congrats and God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 2/26/2023 6:32:00 PM
Means more every day, methinks. Frizzled, Frazzled and Frayed, LLC.
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Date: 2/26/2023 5:27:00 PM
A great read. The garment comes to life and takes on a personality....keep looking after it. Regards
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Date: 2/26/2023 11:04:00 AM
Sparkling with creativity, I see a win, Waltzing your way! Pangie
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 2/26/2023 11:44:00 AM
Agreed….loose dress of life. Pangie
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John Lawless
Date: 2/26/2023 11:20:00 AM
...Tis said: "we should wear life as a loose garment"
Date: 2/25/2023 8:30:00 AM
Who doesn't own a tattered garment kept for comfort? I have a closet full which I refuse to depart with. Out of style, faded torn you name it. I am certain everyone will relate to this one John. Goodluck. A pleasure to read:)
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John Lawless
Date: 2/26/2023 11:19:00 AM
Hey Daniel, my granddaughter once asked me "Papa, why did you wear that shirt?"...I replied: "because it was on top."

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