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Fragrant Garden

The fragrant garden’s jasmine suggestions, gardenia’s pungent complement. Listening silently to music of insects in the grass, sometimes more rapid, sometimes slower. Silently listening to the music

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/31/2013 4:38:00 PM
this is a very nice poem, green grass and flowers in the back or front yard ;} Happy blessed Easter .
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Jack Jordan
Date: 3/31/2013 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie, and the same for you. Thanks for reading and commenting. Jack
Date: 3/31/2013 9:43:00 AM
I noticed that myself. I've been reading a lot of haiku and haiku theory lately that seems to have rubbed off, however unconsciously. Thanks for the reading. Jack
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Date: 3/31/2013 8:30:00 AM
gosh, this one almost could be a tanka as well, Jack. I enjoyed your fragrant garden.
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Date: 3/30/2013 5:37:00 PM
Your poem is beautiful, and smells lovely Mr Jordan... have yourself a nice and happy Easter..pd
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Jack Jordan
Date: 3/30/2013 6:05:00 PM
Back at'cha, pd... Jack
Date: 3/30/2013 9:09:00 AM
- Sounded lovely, Jack. - I will come ..... - xoxo / / Anne-Lise :)
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Jack Jordan
Date: 3/30/2013 9:55:00 AM
I'll look for you. Jack

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