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Fragmented Fantasies

Crushed under the hand of fate, misery shadows my day. For looking into your eyes, I saw hope crumbling away. Fragmented fantasies morphed into long-forgotten fears. And dreams began to flounder, in a sea of fallen tears. When feelings felt out of place, suspicions began to rise. And yet, ignoring the truth, I closed my eyes to your lies. But now that you have left me, my whole world's falling apart. And I don't know what to do, or even worse, where to start. (Quatrain) 10/21/2015

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Date: 5/13/2018 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful introspection, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:12:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, your visits are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 10/21/2015 2:07:00 PM
What an amazing piece! A 7!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2015 10:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Anna, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 10/21/2015 2:03:00 PM
Love makes us close our eyes to many things...even when the alarm bells won't stop ringing. Thanks for sharing these emotions.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 10/22/2015 10:02:00 AM
Thanks Lin, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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