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Fragment Fourteen Point Two

Nothing less than false pretenses Different folks, strokes, different faces Breaking my heart into pieces Hurting big time in all places

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/21/2016 8:53:00 PM
Jesus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/15/2016 8:59:00 PM
Jesus, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Date: 7/27/2015 9:58:00 AM
simple lines but it pulls much!!~OLive Eloisa
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Jesus De Castro
Date: 8/27/2015 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Olive for taking time to read my work! :)

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