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Fragile Heart

Fragrant like the rose in bloom, Reluctant is the wild stallion, Amongst thy flowers in the spring, Gleefully skipping like a child, Illustrious thou art that fragile heart, Liken the swan compared to geese, Elegant, graceful, splendid and kind. Hearing your heart beat soft in rhyme, Eagerly it races on lovers approach, Artfully elusive, beyond response, Reddish hue, your face blushes too, Timid I see, your heart pumps free. 10~19~2016

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Date: 10/22/2016 1:32:00 AM
Hi Rick, poem has a calm and soothing effect to it. Great job.
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White Wolf
Date: 10/22/2016 6:26:00 PM
Thanks Morgen /|\
Date: 10/19/2016 7:48:00 PM
Simply beautiful poem, Rick. Touche. The lover in you is quite something to see. You never cease to amaze me w/your depth of sensitivity. That's why I love you I suppose. Excellent poem, masterfully written w/exceptional care and tenderness. Superb ending too. I loved it. Ty for sharing this lovely poem w/us. Love and more love to you, mate.
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Date: 10/19/2016 8:57:00 PM
Why thanks RW! I have received only positive feedback thus far, and enjoy reading such lovely comments such as yours. Thanks for the love bro, and call me Budgie or Budge! Don't really care for my name much at all, all my friends call me Budgie or the Budge. (after the budgerigar)/|\
Date: 10/19/2016 3:37:00 PM
Rick, I love the way you used lots of imagery in this work. You really captured the ESSENCE of a fragile heart. Lovely work. I bet it scores!!
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White Wolf
Date: 10/19/2016 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, Whether or not it scores doesn't concern me really, I just enjoy learning new forms ATM, and I found this form interesting, San Woo did a double!!! Now that's a challenge, hers inspired me to have a go, but not a double, Haha, I was very impressed. /|\
Date: 10/19/2016 10:08:00 AM
This one is simply excellent, Rick:) all my best wishes:)
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White Wolf
Date: 10/19/2016 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Jo, very nice of you to say so, cheers /|\
Date: 10/19/2016 6:46:00 AM
Acrostic and a lovely poem too ... not often found ... very well done ...
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White Wolf
Date: 10/19/2016 6:57:00 AM
Wow! What a great comment, I'm touched! Thanks Probir /|\
Date: 10/19/2016 5:27:00 AM
Loved it first word to last, but those first two lines, are moving and set the tone.
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Date: 10/19/2016 5:34:00 AM
Thanks Paloma, That means a great deal to me coming from someone as good as yourself! Cheers /|\
Date: 10/19/2016 1:43:00 AM
Tis a good place to start. Peace and many blessings to you Rick.
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White Wolf
Date: 10/19/2016 1:45:00 AM
Thanks Steven, and straight back at ya mate! Cheers /|\

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