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Fragile Freedoms

Lost in France, Resting 'neath a simple cross, Just name,nationality and rank; Giving of life,was his loss. At home, A breaking,aching heart; A sweetheart's pain; Her emptiness was another's gain. In memory fading go As echoing years slip by, And still her tears flow; Vivid yet her anguish sigh. Forgotten,forfeit and for what? freedom frailties,fragile, Such ideas still beguile; T'was ever thus,a peasant soldier's lot.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/10/2009 6:26:00 AM
Dear Brian, line 3.."Just"? line 8 "anothers gain"? line 11 Yet,...........line 12..perhaps STILL...instead of "yet" twice? ...and a wee bit of tweaking to the last line..BIG HUGS!!! GREAT CONTENT...heartfelt..Light & Love
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