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Fragile

Life and death. Between, a thin gap lies- fragile, and weak. A mistaken footstep leads to the end of breathing. The wildest dreams- shattered; The brightest amber- crushed; The purest spring- contaminated. Life and death, all I can say is this- Such differences can be made, with just a thin line's break.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/18/2016 2:50:00 PM
This is excellent and so true. I love how the last line works here and the emphasis placed on the last three words by the spacing. Enjoyed your other poems too!!
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