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Fractured Ceila Maynard Is a young woman weighing all of one Hundred pounds soaking wet. Sitting on the jetty she has an Epiphany regarding the fault lines beneath the ocean floor. Never hearing of a fault line before this incredible Journey shows her a great truth far above her years Traveling in a vision through the depths of the sea into a great cavern Of total darkness and ice-cold waters, fear rose up inside her Popping out of the pitch rose glowing lights made from phosphorous Guiding her on an experience that would alter her life and countless others forever Amazed by the plate movement and the damage they create How they shifted the earth above, below and in her human earth Embarked her on a mission that will amaze you when step onto The pages of this book following her footsteps to even greater Experiences that will boggle the mind and cost her dearly For bringing this knowledge to the world Carole Cookie Arnold May 23, 2013 Contest entry You wrote a novel

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 11:53:00 AM
    Good write. No wonder you won with this entry. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 1:18:00 PM
    Congratulations Carole xx

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:48:00 PM
    What a unique twist of a story format! This was terrific.....and captured my interest!

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:42:00 AM
    Thank you for entering my contest. There were many good writings but they were not Introductions