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Fox At Midnight

Rustling in the bush The night time world awakens Dark eyes in moonlight The red fox is curious Unworried, he trots away

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2014 5:49:00 PM

gosh I love this simple tanka showing such a vivid picture of that curious fox. If it were my contest, this one would rate high. Loved your story about the cat too.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/19/2014 10:08:00 PM

Love this glimpse of a red fox. Magical tanka, SuZ

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/17/2014 9:57:00 AM

Dear LNC, Your poem reminded me that the red fox is an endangered species. I hope whatever was "rustling in the bush" doesn't hinder the fox's chances to rebound. Awesome entry for the contest and I wish you success as well as a Happy Easter. Love, Carolyn