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FOX-MANS REIGN OF TERROR

The heavens opened wide that night, Thunder pounded the skies with might, Lightening, God’s pyrotechnics were in play, A great delight for the fox to have his way. Power knocked out, no doubt this was a dread, The local rag’s first page warned of the fox. Three villagers last night found dead , A young couple mutilated along with well Liked grocery owner, Mr. Brown. All doors bolted, and shutters tied down. The wily Fox lived in a nearby forest, said To have been seen, a demon said old Fred, Half fox half man, a fearful sight, An ugly filthy creature, a murderer outright. The men of the village planned to meet, This demon who was full of hate, Was surely soon to meet his fate. This danger stranger, was a game changer, In their village oh so small, This meant he should be eliminated Once and for all. And thus a plan was formed, but another Frenzied storm flew by, With hail stones, golf ball size, Which rained down from darkened skies. The Fox-Man visited poor old Fred’s house, His target was Fred's daughter. Another Family died that night their children Seven and five, surely went to heaven, The fox, once again took advantage Of the storm, and left his hole, Four further human hearts he stole. Snares were promptly set up around the Village, this time the fox man, would not Escape, was snared in broad daylight, This brazen devil hearted man Was taken to the local zoo. He snarled, he snapped, he bit two Staff members, he looked so evil. Could he flee on a night, That thunder pounded the sky with might, A frightful dread still within the people’s sight. A mourning villager, who had lost his daughter, One night, when the heavens opened wide Climbed over the zoo wall, He decided it was his call, Found and shot the demonic half man half fox. He was hailed a hero, was old Fred, That he had shot the Fox-Man dead, The local news wrote of Fox Man’s demise A murderer who was so despised.

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Date: 3/31/2024 8:02:00 AM
Great story-telling Jen. Your imagery is fabulous! :)
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Date: 3/1/2024 1:56:00 PM
Jennifer, as evil as the creature was, I was a bit sad that it was killed in the zoo. I get the anger for sure. I read all the comments and maybe I am missing something. I'm not a proponent of capital punishment, but I am also not all knowing by a long shot. The story is very powerful and obviously made an impression on people reading it. A really well-told provocative story.
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Date: 2/28/2024 1:16:00 AM
Your story was chilling, and well crafted Jennifer, it is gripping and filled with imagery and horror. I am glad justice was served and the demon sent to hell where it belonged.
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Date: 2/26/2024 1:21:00 AM
- They lived in fear ... an evil person/animal was allowed to go free for far too long ... he deserved death - A picture of the evil we have in our world - A great story, written with excitement., dear Jenny :) - I wish you a lovely new week :) - hags ?
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Date: 2/25/2024 2:02:00 PM
A great story so well told Jennifer, so glad the Fox-man got his just desserts.. Have a blessed week, Gordon
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Date: 2/25/2024 10:10:00 AM
Jennifer, the storyteller in you surfaces! This tragic story is so well told with the lyrical cadence of your rhymes. This is really impressive. While the story is unnerving, I was captivated by the battle between hate and retribution. The thoughtful choice of words and images shows your poetic prowess. Thank you for sharing this most creative tale! I hope there will be more stories in the future! You have a gift for storytelling! Blessings! Happy Lent!
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Date: 2/22/2024 10:49:00 PM
You certainly have a way with words, my poetic friend. A fine tale to tell of one, half man, on his way to Hell. I'll add this one to my list of FAVs. It was more entertaining than a pack of naves. I hope all is well in your part of the world, Jen. Smiles ~ Blessings my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 2/22/2024 2:01:00 PM
I enjoyed your story, it's like a new take on the wolfman. Great storytelling.
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Date: 2/22/2024 11:09:00 AM
This poem is truly remarkable, a testament to the talent of my dear friend Jennifer. The poem evolves such as a mysterious story, exploring the darkest worries of a community and creating a feeling of imminent tragedy. The detailed portrayals of lightning and thunderstorms evoke a feeling of expectation, hinting at the unfortunate occurrences that will soon transpire. It was a delightful read. Hugs and best regards
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Date: 2/22/2024 9:58:00 AM
Why does this world always have an evil person? I am not sorry Fox Man was killed. A lively story.
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Date: 2/21/2024 12:34:00 PM
My dear friend Jennifer.. Your poem unfolds like a chilling tale from the depths of a village's darkest fears, where the heavens themselves seem to echo the turmoil within. The imagery of thunder pounding the skies and lightning illuminating the night sets a foreboding atmosphere, foreshadowing the tragedy that unfolds. Enjoyed reading it..
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:21:00 PM
great storytelling skills, Jennifer. Your poem kept me engaged and on the edge of my seat. Glad Fred shot the diabolical Fox Man...delightful read. have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 2/20/2024 7:58:00 AM
And good riddance too , thankfully his reign of terror has come to an end. Hope you're keeping well Jennifer. Tom
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