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Four Walls

Four walls Sat destitute within four walls of her citadel, Embellished in gold and pricey diamonds, Adorable silky cher in vast ambit, Waiting and waiting, days after days till the war will end, For her prince to return victorious, in jubilance. Longing soft heart, Abandoned in walls of riches, dignity kindness and valiance, With no privilege of freedom, A tearful soul eating her heart. Not a mere breath, She is an esprit with subtle thrust, She is an essence beyond four walls, That else embalm and macadamize. Written Feb 24th, 2016 For contest by Chase Now entered for "Any poem #38" poetry contest by PD A

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Date: 4/1/2016 2:53:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write Upma, going into my faves....Vlad.
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Date: 4/1/2016 4:37:00 AM
Congratulations .....learned new words....remembered childhood stories....superb
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Date: 3/31/2016 11:54:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Awesome Any Poem #38 win. Stop by my blog "GONE," drop by and leave a smile if you'd like. :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/12/2016 3:37:00 PM
Dr Sharma, congrats on your win. I had to look 'macadam' up too.
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Date: 3/11/2016 1:16:00 PM
Oh my, what a wonderful take on the contest,.....so sad, historical, filled with romantic longing like an old fable. Well done, Dr. Sharma
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:39:00 AM
So deep with longing and waiting, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:20:00 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your "4 walls" win.... Love LINDA
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Date: 3/11/2016 10:12:00 AM
thanks
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:15:00 AM
A lovely page with mind blowing lines. This is wonderful dear friend. Weldon and thank you for yet another excellent share
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Date: 2/25/2016 2:25:00 AM
WOW! Lovely write, dear one...I also need to look up that last word. The longing in her heart for her loved one is very clearly portrayed in your lines...
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Date: 2/24/2016 6:05:00 PM
Resilience, great expectations. I must look up macadamise.
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/25/2016 1:15:00 AM
Thnx for ur kind visit Iris..
Date: 2/24/2016 3:50:00 PM
Upma, I feel her longing!! That last word was new for me!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/25/2016 1:14:00 AM
Thanks Andrea..
Date: 2/24/2016 7:17:00 AM
Another great write, Upma. Good luck in the contest. Peace my dear:)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/24/2016 7:33:00 AM
Appreciate ur kind visits Daniel//

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