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four Senryu

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four Senryu

Senryu 4

Is graffiti 
A plague in our cities 
Or beautiful art?  
 

 Life in big cities
Is lived on street levels 
Not in skyscrapers 


Was Jesus Jewish?
Has he got a birth certificate 
To substantiate  it? 


Most drinking holes 
Are on the ground floor
Isn't that a blessing 

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  1. Date: 12/11/2013 9:51:00 AM
    Jan, enjoyed all the haiku....LINDA

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 12/11/2013 1:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you...Linda
  1. Date: 12/10/2013 7:01:00 PM
    Each of these makes me smile. I think I like the second and the last the best. Dangerous - drinking on the roof. No hangover. The he "hang over" comes first. Da dum.

    hansen Avatar jan oskar hansen
    Date: 12/11/2013 1:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    yes, better sit on the floor when drinking