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Four Senryu

Senryu 4 Is graffiti A plague in our cities Or beautiful art? Life in big cities Is lived on street levels Not in skyscrapers Was Jesus Jewish? Has he got a birth certificate To substantiate it? Most drinking holes Are on the ground floor Isn't that a blessing

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Date: 12/11/2013 9:51:00 AM
Jan, enjoyed all the haiku....LINDA
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/11/2013 1:23:00 PM
thank you...Linda
Date: 12/10/2013 7:01:00 PM
Each of these makes me smile. I think I like the second and the last the best. Dangerous - drinking on the roof. No hangover. The he "hang over" comes first. Da dum.
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 12/11/2013 1:26:00 PM
yes, better sit on the floor when drinking

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