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Four Season Sun Heat

sky weeping ice tears hanging water lamps on branches sparkling diamonds smiles earth turns to sun heat liquifying its icy heart sprouting spring love joy sun simmering heat turns fruits sourness honey sweet with life starting seeds harvest thanksgiving prayer leaves carried by wind return with blessings First Place Winner: Brian Strand 1,2 or 3 Lines Contest-8/7/21

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/12/2021 7:32:00 AM

Back with congrats. Powerful winning work, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2021 11:20:00 AM

a nice set of seasonal haiku. Congrats for your win, Frances

Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/7/2021 6:50:00 AM

Wonderful. Congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/7/2021 10:41:00 AM

Ahh!! We need some of those tears but not the frozen kind. Enjoyed reading your contest entry. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/12/2021 7:35:00 AM

Yes, there are icy hearts about 2 % of the population of the world are psychopathic personalities some are serial killers and some just go about life hurting others and some are criminals in other ways. Then there are those that are sociopathic personalities which I am sure is more than 2 % of the population who do have some remorse but still do wrong. Sara

Frances Schiavina
Date: 6/11/2021 5:59:00 AM

Agree but in reality there is icy hearts that kill, rape, steal even from the mouth of the poor without remorse and without prayer will not turn to God to be defrosted,