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Struggling to breathe, in a dark world of mud. Watching death drip slow, from parted skin. Cut from a knife, now buried in blood. The face of betrayal now rejoices in. Frederic Parker 9/19/15 contest 4 lines

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/28/2015 9:53:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 9/27/2015 9:20:00 AM
Congrats again Frederic on your win!
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Date: 9/26/2015 5:30:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:36:00 PM
Wonderful expressions Frederic! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 9/24/2015 8:55:00 PM
Betrayal...at its darkest...congrats on the win.
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Date: 9/24/2015 3:24:00 PM
Lots of really dark poetry on this list. A big congrats on this one!
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Date: 9/23/2015 6:39:00 PM
Deep and dark, grats on your win!
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Date: 9/23/2015 6:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/23/2015 10:46:00 AM
"Et tu, Brute?" Great write, Frederic. Dark and sinister.
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Date: 9/22/2015 11:06:00 PM
A deep cute and a dark poem! Constance sure came up with an inspiring contest for us!
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Date: 9/22/2015 6:05:00 PM
Doesn't get much deeper or darker than this...Well done. BG
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Date: 9/20/2015 4:58:00 AM
ohh how intense are your lines, frederick... wonderfully constructed despite the bleak tone... huggs
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Date: 9/20/2015 12:30:00 AM
Gosh this is deep and dark Frederic good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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