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Four Haikus

1. one with the music  a vestibule for magic  love fills warm the air ................................................... 2. bonsai beautiful  with white scented blossoms grow though old still virile ...................................................... 3. gold red swirls and curves   the frozen flames light the night  save me brave fireheart ........................................................ 4. scampers a bright moon  gifts liquid life a lit view  watch them rendezvous

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Date: 9/24/2014 12:50:00 AM
gosh, i found way back here the type of creative haiku I believe that the one contest was looking for! Too bad these are not new ones. they would have been ideal. I can't even decide which I like best, but I think the last two are my favorites. A soupmail for you soon.
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Date: 9/12/2014 11:05:00 AM
Hola, Maurice, stopping by to read, and check out the comment you left on my comment.. awesome...LINDA
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Date: 9/9/2014 5:37:00 PM
Music, bonsai, against a new moon. There's no better sight in natures front room. Fine set of Haiku Maurice, James :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/9/2014 5:48:00 PM
thank you James.
Date: 9/4/2014 12:52:00 PM
Hola, Maurice, I done forgot what I was talking about... Starting a new day here at the soup... Hope you are well....LINDA
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 1:07:00 PM
Hola, Linda.
Date: 9/3/2014 11:05:00 PM
LOL, before you think, I forgot... this is a triple tag, .. Tag Tag Tag, your it
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/4/2014 7:31:00 AM
i never forget. what were we talking about.
Date: 9/3/2014 11:04:00 PM
You have 4 haiku here. I love the second one the most, something about that bonsai, that's hypnotic... A classy way in freshen up the air, ...Linda
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/3/2014 11:16:00 PM
it's because it is old and virile. it reminds you of me.
Date: 8/19/2014 10:04:00 AM
Lovely string haiku on beauty,Maurice
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 8/20/2014 7:14:00 PM
thank you for your kind words.

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