Fountain of Youth---The Geriatric

This Shepherd boy hath long lost his flock, Daydreaming in a daze Not a thought I gave to the Time on the clock- For those are the prudish ways! Live in joy and merriment, A Happiness without end? Ha! I could never be more content Than to have my Youth again!

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/2/2013 6:21:00 AM

Lovely work Archaic. I was searching through your work and the title lured me in. Well penned!

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/2/2013 8:32:00 AM

My gracious appreciation, Mustapha; many thanks to you for dropping by and reviewing :)

Aiden Asoll

Date: 8/28/2013 9:36:00 AM

Ahhh!! I swear I love your poetry more than I do John Keats' at times. You have your own unique style and its brilliant, I don't just mean the archaisms, but the concise expression of various themes and ideas. First two lines aswell, they stand out boldly and you can't ignore the metaphor there. You get me all enthusiastic about poetry :P Still though, I hope I don't feel like this about youth when I get older, suppose it's likely though.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/28/2013 10:35:00 AM

Aiden, that compliment touches me to core of my Soul, for Keats is one of my favorite poets as well, and he has inspired me time and time again. I cannot thank you enough; "thank you" doesn't even begin to articulate my sincerest appreciation. It elates me to think I have inspired another poet, as so many have inspired me :)

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/28/2013 5:37:00 AM

IF ONLY V CUD HAV OUR YOUTH BAK ~V~

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/28/2013 5:52:00 AM

If only, V! Thank for popping in :)

Milton Toran

Date: 8/27/2013 2:48:00 PM

There's an old saying..."My get up and go has got up and went! LOL!! Loved every word of your writing!...Milt

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/28/2013 5:51:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Milt; I appreciate it. I think that lyric's in an Aerosmith song lol :)