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“...we achieve true wholeness by embracing our fragility...” Jalaja Bonheim i had no script no actors no stage instead let me direct this life my life stage the words add a subtle dramatic tone with fragility once the foundation is built i'll work on emotional recall work in the layers does it sing does it dance does it make you think does it make you feel you can design the most beautiful building in the world but with no structure it will not stand for this one i start with the word "I" yup that’s a keeper next go out on a limb "Love" it can't be all about me so i finish with "You" yes you ‘what happens when you open your heart?, your inner strength becomes an outer foundation.’

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Date: 5/17/2017 2:52:00 PM
A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of tragic moments, that led us to love. Emile. #7
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Date: 12/12/2016 5:58:00 PM
Hello Maurice,this poem is beautiful.I like the way the words flow together. I sense this poem to be romantic. Because that is how I felt this poem to be. A wonderful poem you wrote.
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Date: 11/14/2016 8:34:00 PM
You have the most wonderful voice to compliment this deep and meaningful poem !! Well done !!! This is compelling!
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Date: 11/12/2016 4:20:00 PM
You 'build' solidly with three winning words, Armand..."I_Love_You"!! May you also find enough love to make your life happy and meaningful. ~ Regards // paul
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/12/2016 4:27:00 PM
Thank you Paul. Lots Of Love, armand.
Date: 11/12/2016 9:54:00 AM
I love you too....very nice
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/12/2016 10:13:00 AM
Thank you, such an incredible comment from you. A Ton of Love always, armand.
Date: 11/11/2016 10:11:00 PM
I have to say "I DO" love this poem!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/12/2016 10:12:00 AM
I do...love you my dear friend.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:24:00 PM
sorry I took so long to see this one, by the way. I get so busy with life. Finally catching up on comments and got to YOURS which always are so sweet, and finally got to see this gem!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/12/2016 10:14:00 AM
Thank you, your comments are important to me.
Date: 11/10/2016 8:23:00 PM
OH WOW, ARmand. I LOVE THIS!!! Was listening to your voice and wondering what was this big poem you were building the foundation for. Got to the end, and the ending was simply I love you. Simple yet so human. That is how you are. And also you can write complicated and do it SO WELL. a huge FAVE for me!!!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/12/2016 10:11:00 AM
I do...lots of love.
Date: 11/10/2016 9:39:00 AM
This is such a clever layout, Maurice. You are a true original. Love, daver
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/10/2016 4:20:00 PM
You are one of my favourite poets, my dear friend. I don't touch your coattail. I hope poets who see this comment will take the time to click your name and visit your amazing poetry.
Date: 11/9/2016 2:35:00 PM
what a heartwarming gush of emotion, armarnd... i am swooning!..huggs
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2016 3:17:00 PM
Thank you nette lots of love my friend armand.
Date: 11/9/2016 1:23:00 PM
Pure magic! The delivery touches my very core. A very touching and beautiful piece. Love it, It's a definite fav.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2016 1:26:00 PM
Thank you, all my love armand.
Date: 11/9/2016 12:22:00 PM
Thank you : )
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2016 12:32:00 PM
Your welcome...love you lots.
Date: 11/9/2016 11:52:00 AM
Hi Armand, I enjoyed the way you crafted this write. I loved this piece and your amazing pen as well. A Big seven: -) Alexis
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. Lots Of Love always, armand.
Date: 11/9/2016 11:45:00 AM
So well done! Very special Maurice! :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/9/2016 11:51:00 AM
Thank you Heidi...it was heartfelt. Lots Of Love, armand.

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