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With the sun in my eyes, I grab my sunglasses and go I go off in the world. Wondering where life will take me next. Not knowing drives me insane. However, I take the pain. I spot a destination, and decide to go move forward. I end up on a sandy beach. Putting on sunblock makes me wonder how hot the sun really is on this day. So I then take out my phone. Looking on the weather app, and soon realize it is 90 degrees! Today… I realize that when I open my eyes and really look, there is so much more than just a destination. There is a journey.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2016 3:52:00 PM

Katie, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@