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Fossilized

There are things in this sphere that are painfully clear. My memory has fled bottom's like lead. Alas, old age is here.

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David Smith

Date: 1/31/2019 10:40:00 PM

Just what the Doctor didn't order and had no say about, but if you mix with right people it won't be too obvious if you are all oblivious. Nice compact write, that says it all. Will test out you attention span on some of your other gems. Regards David in NZ

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2018 10:40:00 AM

Lol I can relate Paul I'm sure my son thinks I'm an old fossil lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 3/4/2018 11:43:00 AM

Hi, Jan. I'm afraid my limerick lacks "punch," but it does manage to state a universal truth, as you affirm. Agatha Christie said: "An archeologist [makes] the best husband. The older she gets, the more interested he is in her." Hugs

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/2/2018 5:48:00 AM

Your opening line is fine...after a while memories just go drifting by...Enjoyed it...All the best