Forty

Bliss and ecstasy vibrate within me, as everyone I have known in my life gathers in a blissful, warm circle, all ready to celebrate my birthday. A candle standing above number forty reminds me I’ve lived a quarter century miraculously! Date: 22/01/2016

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 11:42:00 AM

:) thanks

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/3/2016 10:28:00 PM

Teddy, thank you for the reply

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/5/2016 5:57:00 AM

Welcome Linda, thanks for replying back...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2016 11:23:00 PM

Teddy, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda! *^_^* <3

Janice Canerdy

Date: 1/28/2016 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Teddy. Janice

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 2/2/2016 5:28:00 AM

Thank you so much Janice! *^_^*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/28/2016 2:08:00 AM

Wonderful write Teddy ..Congrats on big win!!

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 6:53:00 AM

Thank you very much Dr. Upma! :-)

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 12:21:00 PM

TEDDY, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 6:39:00 AM

Thank you so much Skat!! *^_^* <3

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2016 9:42:00 AM

You're off a bit on the math but I enjoyed your celebratory poem. Congrats on your win. I do however hope that forty is a quarter of your life and that you make it to 160 and beyond.

Teddy Kimathi
Date: 1/28/2016 6:31:00 AM

Hahaha. Indeed 160 years is by the grace of God. Thank you for enjoying my work!! :-)