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Fortune's Reversal

Fortune’s Reversal Today is Labor Day 2005 – A day of loving & compassionate labors As I gather up clothes to help them survive, to bring hope to the hearts of my neighbors --savagely displaced loves they can’t replace homes & jobs erased & tears roll down their face— They look to the world, call out to all nations Overwhelmed with grief & rampant despairing They have no outlet to vent their frustrations They feel their God is no longer caring --lives underwater no one could stop her still gone the laughter many months after— There was no taming this furious shrew As she destroyed and uprooted lives Katrina was murderous all the way through & did not care who or what would survive --hugely impersonal a raging dispersal no dress-rehearsal fortune’s reversal--

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 10/11/2008 5:09:00 PM
Beautifully written tribute to a very tragic day and as we continue to have tragic days, how quickly what is news becomes passe within a shorter and shorter period of time and aid is no longer given without reminders!! Very well-deserved feature this week. It sure got me thinking ... smile ... Congratulations, Rebecca!!
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Date: 10/6/2008 11:37:00 AM
Rebecca, where are you? I have truly missed hearing from you. Hope all is well. Congratulations dear friend on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 10/6/2008 9:23:00 AM
Congratulations Reverand, on "Fortune's Reversal" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 10/5/2008 9:38:00 PM
Rebecca this poem is very well written and it truly lets the reader feel the horrific tragedy to the lives that were so devastated - congrats on being featured - God Bless Reverend
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Date: 10/5/2008 5:41:00 PM
You put such emotion into this tragic time! Well done! ~Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2008 3:06:00 PM
This is such a powerful piece capturing an aspect of the devastation after Katrina. Congratulations on having your well-written poem featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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